First proof, computer print-out, with manuscript amendments, and with a covering letter with suggestions for amendment from Peter Jay of Anvil Press Poetry. 295 pages, two to the leaf.
Word-processed collection of all Dale’s carols, including several not listed above, with notes of any settings made. With a photocopy of a manuscript list of carols and settings.
Two copies of Agenda Editions edition, with variant card covers, one marked ‘Author’s copy. Notes made for William [Cookson]’, which includes notes added by Dale on the context of many of the sonnets, the other marked ‘Author’s copy (corrected)’, the corrections amounting to a note ‘cut in futur...
Final pre-proof, word-processed, with printer’s corrections and an accompanying letter and queries from Peter Jay of the Anvil Press, dated 17 Apr 1996.
Edge to Edge (inscribed ‘Text for collected poems, updated 2005-06’), Under the Breath (inscribed 'annotated for Collected, December 2005), originally in the binder at Add MS 89065/1/104, With copious amendments and indications of inclusion in the final collection.
Walk from the House (a photocopy), The Storms (disbound), Mortal Fire, 1970 edition (disbound), Mortal Fire, 1976 edition (disbound), originally in the binder at Add MS 89065/1/104, With copious amendments and indications of deletion from the final collection.