Word-processed draft of the brief life, introduction and some translations, here entitled ‘Selections from Charms’. With manuscript amendments and inscribed ‘Wrong print-out’.
Word-processed draft on A6 leaves, with the copyright date 2005, and with manuscript amendments made in Jan 2007 described as ‘Proof revisions in green’, being amendments made by Dale to the proofs sent him in Jan 2006 and Dec 2006, below.
Page proofs, two pages to each A4 leaf, with a covering letter from Peter Jay of Anvil Press Poetry, dated 1 Jan 2006 and inscribed ‘First proofs’. With manuscript amendments by Dale, indicated by self-adhesive labels, and by the publishers.
Page proofs, two pages to each A4 leaf, with a covering letter from Peter Jay of Anvil Press Poetry, dated 15 Dec 2006. With manuscript amendments by Dale and by the publishers.
Print-out by Dale on A5 leaves of amended versions of the pages marked in T11.6, with some further manuscript amendments by him, and a print-out on A6 leaves of further pages with indication of ‘Major text changes for page proofs’.
Third set of page proofs, two pages to each A4 leaf, with a covering letter from Peter Jay of Anvil Press Poetry, dated 26 [Mar 2007], with a few pencilled queries, some on self-adhesive notes, and a further letter from Jay dated 5 Jun 2007, enclosing four leaves of final queries, and a prospectus.